Reading and Doing

Reading and Doing

From reading both peers topics on what they had chosen which was 'Console Generations / How Video Games have evolved'. In this topic I made the comments on and was really impressed at how each was interputed and where both very interesting and I learned a lot from on stuff I never knew before. While then also receiving comments on my own topic 'Effects On Mental Health' from the comments that I received I learned on what I could improve on and hon how to make my topic better and to correct the mistakes. Some mistakes included such as spelling and grammar mistakes where they found it difficult to read and hard to understand parts due to it. From these comments made on my topic I then went to the working book and made the changes that needed to be made to my topic such as spelling and so on.


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