Doing and Reading Week 9

Doing and Reading Week 9 This week I refined my work further after receiving comments on work such as grammar and spelling mistakes and also after being told that my topic was somewhat reflective. I went and corrected these mistakes and made it little to no reflection brought in my topic. Once I had corrected all these mistakes and had gone over my intro and conclusion and made sure everything was up to par with the topic. I then went and reflected two other peoples topic and added in comments to help with feedback. Feedback Comment